Heya great poem
is a senryu like a haiku
except different like topic
they look alot alike
except i know haikus are about nature and this aint
so yeah just wondering what the difference is lol
good job and thx for the comments

Keenan

I love Senryus. They are short; yet pack a powerful punch.

The title you selected is perfect for this piece. Tears of boold often roll down many cheeks after experiencing a crushed heart.

Nicely penned. I can actually see myself lying there crying into my satin pillowcase while leaving a red tear streaked stain.

I love it! Keep it up hun.

--Sher

Great poem.It's amazing how much emotion and deepth can go into just a couple words.Can you teach me how to write this style?Anyway great poem,5/5,simply amazing.
Miranda

Short, sad and awesome. This was a great senryu, it was really well written.
love Tara-Kay
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This is short but straight to the point... in my opinion theres a message in this poem...and of course that would be a broken heart.

i really liked it..and i'm not familiar with senryu poems, but i thought you wrote this one very well.

nice job.5/5

Great one! You are good at that. nice job. 5/5.......123/5 if it were possible.