Comments : I lay awake..

  • 16 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    Woow that was a really good poem even though it was short i really liked it and i know how you feel i do that all the time and lay there and just think good job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by shamvi

    A painful msg ..loved it

  • 16 years ago

    by J u l e s

    Sad poem. it has a good message to it though... alot of people go through this all the time and yet they cant find ways to look past it. but sad poem but also good poem.

  • 14 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I completely fell in love with this poem even from the title. i haven't been able to sleep lately and this bascially expressed almost everything i'm feeling when i do try to sleep. silence is horrible. great poem. i'm adding it to my favorites :)