Comments : Two Worlds Apart

  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ExcellenT writinG..... 5/5

    moreover......

    mE.... thE 41sT visitoR, 1sT readeR, 1sT voteR anD dE 1sT tO commenT oN diS excellenT poeM...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Alma

    Mysterious and intriguing poem
    I especially lykd this line:
    "A voice once heard
    A face past seen"
    It captures evryone and how ur presence on this earth after you pass will only be a memory- sumtin dat simply once was.
    beautiful poem! 5/5!