Comments : They lied-you passed on

  • 16 years ago

    by ChaosKiller69

    I Have Lost Alot Of My Family And A Couple Of Close Friends In My Life, So I Know How It Feels.
    The Poem Was A Good Read And I Hope To Read More

  • 16 years ago

    by Xxcrazy4UxX

    Im sorry, i know how you feel..

  • 16 years ago

    by Leah

    Aww, that's so sad. I've never experienced a loss of a friend before, so I can't fully understand what you went through, but this poem has given me all the honesty I need. I'm voting a 5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Dian PH

    Wow excellente!!!! me amor!!! favoulus!!!

    well deep feeling and emotion on it...

    you got me!!!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by LiViNg To DiE

    Ya i know how you feel...
    my step sister commited suicide on january 26, 2007...
    she was only 34!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Very good really nice rhyming you had going on there :D xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Munequita

    I completely relate to this i lost my cousin when i was 14 i'll be 16 next month n it still tears my heart cuz i wish there was something 2 do