Comments : Final destination:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    If everybody lived life like it was the last day...I think all wars would end cold turkey, everyone would eat his favorite stuff, do their favourite sport one more time, say 'I love you' to the ones they really care for and go to sleep for the last time at the end of that day in the arms of the one they loved most ( not neccecarily their husband/ wife but maybe another sweetheart he/ she holds more dear).
    If it was my last day, I would fly halfway around the world to be with my sweetheart, even if it meant being inside the plane for the biggest part of that day.

    5/ for your original poem!

    Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Raychil

    I loved this poem. It's so true. You should live every moment as your last, you never know when it will just end. I liked the message and the flow was beautiful. Altogether an amazing poem.
    <3Raych

    and thanks for commenting my poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Really great job sweetie on your poem and its so true. i think the world would be such a happier place if everyone lived everyday like it was their last 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    This is a beautiful poem.
    The message is great.. It makes me think..
    Loved reading it.
    Take care