Luanne
What a heart-breaking piece. This really brings the tears flowing. Just beautiful.

So good-bye to hurt and anger
hello to a brand new day
knowing my heart will mend
not today but ....someday

How right you are my friend. Someday :)
Love Cindy

I am in the same situation right now. Wonderful poem! It's like you could be describing my life as well. I love it!

Realizing I am not to blame
for you betraying my trust
but if it makes you feel better
blame me if you must

^^ I think its horrible how in some relationships theres finger pointing!...You'd think in love that wouldn't happen but sadly it does...I loved that stanza ma

This is so heart breaking for me to read because I know your upset about things going on for you and I'm just stuck here in my city not knowing what I can do for you :-(....but You're a strong woman mom and what have you not pulled yourself through?........your gunna do fine....you even said peace will come one day.........

I just try to remember that love is what you make of it...hopefully you can make things better :-)
I love you!
Chelsey

Luanne,

Wonderful and heart felt. Could feel the emotion as it pulled at my heartstrings. So sad in the beginning, Yet towards the end you knew and wrote about survival... and you will. No matter what tomorrow may bring, always know that the people who love you will be there during your mending period.

Love and prayers,

Always,
Jeannie

Love the Form..Very Unique..!

5.5**
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Amazing work,truly..i loved every detail!
i really love the way you write and was wondering if you could look over my recent work,i'd appreciate it very much!
take care:)

Sounds very sad, but very good.