Oooo! i love the imagery in this one. and those two last lines. though my absolute favorite line would have to be 'Coloring you when I'm black.' just amazing.

~Kiera

Knowing that you wont come back
won't*

Have you too been waiting so long just like me
to* Consider revising; long, broken flow, awkward sentence

To hear each others goodbye?
each other's*

'Covered in ashes and rust' You're a robot?!
'I'm black' You're black?! 8|
Some of the lines in this should be put into movies ... but not those, lol