It was so sad and touching..And I really liked the flow...you really did a good work with word usage, jason

My fave lines are;

Will you sleep into the day?

Will you hold me there and not go away?

Will you tell me that you want to stay?

Will you make my graylight turn to day?

Keep it up,
Laura

This poem almost made me cry ( maybe because this are the questions that's lingering on my head right now and exactly having the same feeling)...

back to the poem, i love the simplicity of the words and so as the idea coz it helps to bring all the emotions in here.. keep up the good work!

Wow, sounds almost like a song.Very good poem man, keep it up.