Aww that was so adorable i would have never came up with anything like that... i wish that i had a boyfriend like that who really cares for me and loves me like that...your a really good poem writer and i wish to be just like you one day....your a really good friend and no one can say other wise....love

He was all she had in her terrible life
He was the one who kept her form her knife
--awsome line, don't usually like love poetry, but yours are great
5/5

Good job! this is breathtaking!