Wow, wow and just wow! This is so breathtaking!
The title is captivating and you developed whole poem excellently, with great wording. The topic is also amazing, I can completely relate to this piece. Whole poem is so creative, and the most important thing, this is one of the most unique love poems that I've read in a while, and I value uniqueness the most in poetry. I already wrote in one comment that you have great talent for writing love poems, you can write something completely original and different from usual typical love poetry.
This piece is simply brilliant.
It is so effective!
5/5 from me, but you deserve much more for this one.