Very long poem yet so meaningful and touching and well written...keep it up...
and keep writting;D

All the best wishes

Nazeer

That was very good. It started out sweet and sensitive and then seemed to take a slight turn in feelings. When you said "sexy" in the seventh stanza second line, it made the poem seem less romantic and more...something else. I really enjoyed it all though. I liked how it didnt rhyme, but it still sounded very poetic. Great job!

~Morgan~