You write very well! However it makes me sad knowing thats your view on love :( i agree its painful at times, but by the sounds of it your a very creative smart and great guy. I like your writing! take care.

I totally agree with you, sometimes love can be so bad that you just dont want to even try it or give it another chance...i really enjoyed this poem..nice job!=]

Brooke<3

I like it. very nicely written. i have felt like this a few times...just in a girl form lol