Not bad! love the lord and he will love u back.

Wow this is truly a very greatly written poem. keep up thegrat work

Good poem, u delivered it well 5/5

I liked the way this poem ended, makes people think a little more than usual about the subject of the future and what we already have to basically tell what the future will bring. This was well worded, short and to the point. Nice Job.

Peace, Joe