by chelsea
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This is really sad. |
by Tricky Daze
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Wow I liked the sadness and sorrow all along the masterpiece |
by Cindy
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What a awesome piece you have penned. Very heartwrenching. |
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Very effective and emotional, with very good choice of words. I like the rhyme scheme in this one, you did great job with it. Whole poem is very powerful, and it holds a lot of sadness. |
by Gem
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"Here I am once again. |