Awww another beautifully written poem, but i cant seem to stop wondering, its shorter then your usual poems, is everything ok?? none the less it still gets a 5/5 from me :))

"but just the thought of looking back, knowing you did what you choose"

I like this line, i think it sums up what the poem is about. I firmly believe that no matter what is thrown at you from day to day if you try your hardest to get through, keep a smile on your face and try to live in a good way then at the end of every day you can say you did your best and even if you failed at something, you still know you did your best and therefore it was worthwile and a day well spent. What im trying to say is i feel you captured that though perfectly in your poem rahter than my rambling has done. Love it.

Kelly
xx