Your poem was truly amazing, very well written i was actually thinking of writing a poem about something similar but you done it for me, thank you, i couldn't have worded it better than that myself,

ps. please do read and comment on my poems i havent written much but it's all come from my heart. x x x xtc

Your stanza where you rhymed 'above' and 'love' was good. Normally I think that is an overused rhyme, but you did it really nicely. I liked your question, "But is it okay,
That I'm still in love with you?" So many can relate. Nice job!
Charisma*

Very nice poem.. I really liked the way you worked the words in it. very good work.. which I can kinda relate to as well...

Good job
Tim

and tnx for the comment