Incredible poem. Atmosphere is very powerful and imagery is great. Ending is very effective, my favorite stanza is second but whole piece is fantastic. Unique and truly amazing. Just one word can describe this poem-WOW-!

Good job, great poem with strong wording and excellent atmosphere. Well done!5/5

This is a really dark poem.Love the imagery that you have potrayed here.You did a very good job for this.
Take care

W0W THiS iS G00D
Y0U WRiTE VERY WELL
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-MiCHELLE
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