Hey hows it going... your poem was alright for a 1st one. you do need some work though... but we dont all start out best sellers now do we, im not the best... but im ok, you ever need a hand... or some help... hit me up man.
but all in all... good write... keep it up

Heyy this poem is really cute...I enjoyed reading it! Niice job=]

Brooke<3

LovE iT! iT iS beautifuL!!! keeP uP yR lovelY thoughtS iN expressionS anD outlooK....

diS iS luzaN

WOW!!! I love it.