Comments : I wish

  • 16 years ago

    by just me

    I love this. I was hurting like hell....he told me it was all going to be okay because he was there to stay and wasn't going anywhere. He held me while I cried. I beleived the words he said. After all it was a promise and there not meant to be broken. But his words were false. I like the happy ending better.
    Well i just love this cause i can relate as you can see...
    *sigh*
    <3
    L.C

  • 16 years ago

    by Illusion

    I like this one a bit more. and the way you wrote
    plastered smile.

    hear voices above the noise
    you are really great poet

    5/5

    please dont forget to RRC my pOems
    poem1:reason
    poem2:deaf dumb blind

    REGARDS
    MILESTONE