Wow, hun.
Very emotional & touching write.
The flow was flawless & overall, it was great.
Wonderful job Breezie. :) 5.5

- Stephanie Lynn .+.

Aww, this poem is really sad and it's filled with lots of emotion. You really expressed yourself very well! I really like it a lot. The flow of it was great! You really have a way with words. Keep on writing! 5/5

~Kristina