Thanks Kerry. I did receive upsetting news yesterday so I'm very focused on enjoying the little things in life for the next while.

This was a splendid poem. Very sad but still..a good read!

5/5 Ingrid

First off, I'd like to thank you for the comment on my poem "Hello, Smile."
Down to business: The flow with this poem was tremendous. It actually had me taping my fingers in a beat and the corner of my mouth raised a little. But the overall meaning and theme of the poem was quite touching, and caused a lot more emotions than the flow. This is amazing. And I can say, I relaly enjoyed this one.

5/5

Great poem....i really like it very well written..~*~Cindy~*~