Yayayay! such an awesome flow. i love the subject and especially that last stanza. so cool and shivery..in a good way.

~Kiera

Okay, yeah this is one of my favorites out of all your poems xD I love it even more than the last one I just said was my favorite, lol It's right up there next to the Mars and Moon one you showed me in 8th grade, so HAH. Win.

AWESOME. YAY STORY. AGREE ABOUT THE FLOW. COOL. YUS. LOVE.

Lol I like how Kiera signs her name at the end of every comment. Like you don't know her or something, haha