Wow this poem is really really good!!!!!!!!!!!!! good job

I liked this poem I loved your rhyme scheme and how you used internal rhyming :D
Cassey

Loved your poem!! PLEASE keep up the good work!

Well done again! I like how everything just flows together and the rhyming is perfect. Excellent piece. Keep writing!!

I like this cuz sumtimes u jus wanna be a relle gud frnd but then u wanna b a relle gud gf too. i kno im goin through it too. but i kno wen my heart breaks somehow, id rather be a relle gud frnd w/ ben. so thats wat im sticking too. its jus my way of bein neg. lol :D