Comments : Tug Of War.

  • 13 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow this poem is really really good!!!!!!!!!!!!! good job

  • 13 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    I liked this poem I loved your rhyme scheme and how you used internal rhyming :D
    Cassey

  • 13 years ago

    by miranda miller

    Loved your poem!! PLEASE keep up the good work!

  • 13 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    Well done again! I like how everything just flows together and the rhyming is perfect. Excellent piece. Keep writing!!

  • 13 years ago

    by CrossMyHeartAndHopeToDie

    I like this cuz sumtimes u jus wanna be a relle gud frnd but then u wanna b a relle gud gf too. i kno im goin through it too. but i kno wen my heart breaks somehow, id rather be a relle gud frnd w/ ben. so thats wat im sticking too. its jus my way of bein neg. lol :D