This is just beautiful... Such an inspiring little poem, Sherry. Great, awesome senryu! ;o)

Wow!!! It has wonderful atmosphere and you create it with just a few words. I is really beautiful and very emotional. Great poem, short but very powerful! 5/5

Wow, that was powerful. I loved it. The words you used gave a sense of peace but also excitement. It was a very calming poem and although short, enjoyable to read. Very nicely done, 5/5.