I really like this poem, you are so good at rhyming words. i can understand where your coming from. also if i was you, i would keep the person your writing about close to you coz they seem to make your life better. keeps up the good work :).
emily x

Great poem!
I could tell it came from the heart
your fantastic
5.5

That is so beautiful and it reminds me of my love for a certain guy = D beautiful

U really enjoyed this poem, it's all around good.

5/5

Realy love this poem its so true and jus describes how you feel when your in real love lol