Yeah...I liked it, perhaps I loved it.
For now, honestly, I can say this was bloody brilliant. It's deep, deadly, passionate...oh, and quite...hmm, haunting?
Yeah, haunting.
I think I'll read some more of what you've got. And I'm hoping what you've got is more of that delicious dark poetry.
Yes...I said delicious.

Wow brilliant it made me cry you really have talent

Wow... There is nothing I can say that explains how good it is haha.... I dont no how to explain it...but i love it. Its full of emotion. Really good!!

5/5

--**Skye~

-Plz check out some of my poems!-

So deep,so sad ...but vry well written.u got my vote:)