I don't like the last line, it is very effective but it isn't what I have expected. Anyway great poem with incredible imagery. Very unique and excellently written. 5/5

Thank you.
The fact that you like my poem, meens a lot to me.
I didn't ecpect the last line to come to me eaither, but it did. And I just went along with it.

I love how you relate this poem with the galaxy with the moon it's so touching and so real very good!

Thank you sooo much. :p

I like the rhythm in this poem, and the atmosphere is greatly created, somehow haunting. Whole poem has excellent flow.
My favorite stanza is:
-I call for thee,
In the moonless night.
I need you here,
To return the light.-

Keep writing, great job on this one.
5/5 from me

A real masterpiece. A real artistic talent you have. I hope you can share more.