"...The love that i thought would last,
Was never really that strong
Just when i thought i found the one,
Destiny went and proved me wrong.... "

Ive so been there hun, and thought I would never have anything, as destiny proved me wrong many a time, however, just learn to believe and destiny will make it right.
A lovely write hun, well done
K xx

ps. "...Wandering where it all went wrong..." should it be wondering?

It's a powerful poem,

i liked this The love that i thought would last,
Was never really that strong
Just when i thought i found the one,
Destiny went and proved me wrong....

For Me every time it proves That I'm wrong =)

Keep It Up

Lool .. we've posted at the same time =)

Yuck....

I loved this poem. it had a lot of feeling. good work
...........sydni

Strong ending, you start with a description of how you feel and build up the tension like that. This poem is complete, not a gathering of rambling thoughts. Love it