Comments : Path to Paradise

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    You took the title and ran with it.... its simply breathtaking, the words you chose are amazing and the rhyme and flow are perfect, I love it.... well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by x WatCh The Tears FaLl x

    Wow the words you used and the way you put it together really great great great job i would say more but i dont know what else to say other than once again wow!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by ChaosKiller69

    Very well done i would have to say this poem caught my attention and i give it a 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    So romantic and loving. I know there is that special person I would like to share this with and show them these things that you speak of.

    Very nicely done hun. A joyful read.

    --Sher

  • 16 years ago

    by Anna

    I love how u wrote it soo nice to read, makes u feel real nice:)