Good..i like it...its short but it has meaning!
-amanda-

This is just wonderful. I especially love the part that says "A thousand nights have left me doomed
A thousand laughs faded too soon"

It is as though I wanted to cry myself just reading it.

Nicely done babe.

--Sher

A well deserved win on this one.... very deep and sad, the ending line wrapped it all up.... very well done.

Although its short it is filled with such powerful emotion and it flowed beautifully...niice job!

Brooke<3

This poem is very beautiful. It was sad and the pain was indeed captured inside of it. I'm sorry to hear that you don't think you'll be writing anymore poetry, you are a wonderful author with very good poetry. If you decide to, keep up the awesome work. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~