Comments : SILENT SONG

  • 15 years ago

    by Wake

    A woo-hoo @ this amazing piece.. indeed.

    the wording was absoultely awe-some..

    "..Scars are deep,
    Blood is dark,
    Life is blank,
    And you're invisible.."

    a truly superb start.. carried out very well..and yes, damn finely expressed.

    Great piece this.


  • 15 years ago

    by Helen

    Such an intreging poem!!
    I must admite this is the first time iv seen a peom set out like that :) which made it even better :P
    its super amazing


  • 15 years ago

    by susan kanavel

    I love this poem its great :) Great work .. very sad but its got much feeling and work put into it and i can put myself in tha place. Good job again

  • 15 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Wow, I love this piece. It is so deep and touching, you expressed emotions excellently. I can relate to this amazing poem. Every line is truly effective filled with sadness and sorrow. This poem is also unique and it has powerful and vivid imagery.
    5/5 from me