So cute of you and your hus. Long live your marriage :)

Tc and this poem is really heartfely 5/5

Fsams

Honestly the emotions were very well expressed in this poem, and it gave me a little bit of goose bumps most especially in the first five stanzas..but to be honest dear, the flow went off because of a sudden change of character in the next stanzas (after the first 5 stanzas) although i know you want to dedicate those lines to your husband.. =) keep it up!

This is amazing right here..i love how you accurately describe the safe haven we can find in another soul..lot of raw emotion throughout the piece in its entirety...great work!

andrew

So touching and excellently written poem, topic is great and message of this piece is also very good. Very emotional piece, it has impressive rhythm. I love it, but I personally like the second part of the poem(last four stanzas) more than first four. Anyway you should be proud on this poem, it is very deep and meaningful. Well done!