Aww, this poem was such a great read and it showed how much of a caring person you are...great job!

Brooke<3

Again WOOOW!! 5/5
keep it up

Ahhh, this is so sad!!!
Gr8 poem!!!
Keep it up!!
5/5

Thats sweet of u

i hope its not true

pm me if u r ever board

Dude this poem rulz its amazing great writin keep it up :)

Awww thats such a sweet poem.
loved it heaps kinda reminds me of a guy .. excpet the other way arond . lol hah
she'll regret ever leaving you =] =]

My brain tell me to forget,
But my heart says otherwise,
My brain says move on,
My heart says I love her.

i loved that stanza (Y)
5/5

xo.louiiii

Wow long read but worth it !!! you did an amazzing job 5/5 girly

Lol I think a couple of those girls were hitting on you.

Anyway I'm not gonna suck up your bum. But that was.. umm whats the word.. oh gosh I'm gonna have to say it..

"beautiful" *thumbs up*

Wow good poem i love it.

Awww;
Now this is better =]

This Is A Really Cute Poem.
Keep Up The Awesome Work..!
And If Its Based On Your True Experiences, Then Sorry You Had To Go Through That Stuff.
x

Great poem!! loved how you kept saying that you loved her, brought it back to the topic and some writers forget to do that!1 well done!! :P