Wow..got to be one of my favorites from you. The title really pulled me into it, I love the title of this but then reading it just did the title even more justice..the imagery in this piece was amazing and the wording did a good job of pulling it all together. Loved it.

"Now tossed upon the dusty dreams
Lost faces of transparency"

^^ I really liked those lines, they stood out to me.

5.5
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Jeannie
Your poems always touch me deeply. This one really did a number on me. For some reason it brought tears to my eyes.

No life inside the photographs
Faded faces in broken glass
Boxed inside, their souls to see
Among the faded memories.

This was the stanza that really ripped at my heart.
Excellent job my friend.
Love Cindy

Jeannie...This brought to mind so many times I have stared at a picture of a loved one that has moved on, and longed for the knowledge, love, touch or mere existence of that person. Only to come back to reality and know that it is not possible.
You have written a wonderful piece here and this is definitely one of my fave's of yours. Awesome Job, Kay

This piece is simply amazing, I saw it under top rated and the title caught my eye and I just had to read it and I'm glad I did. It rhymes and flows beautifully. It's really a wonderful piece.

I tried to vote it into the contest nominations but with the voting all screwed up like it is, it wouldn't let me. But I do feel it should be in the contest. Great work.

Just so you know, this is my favorite poem in the entire world

i read it constantly

its just...wow i love this poem