This poem showed the most emotion I have read in a long time.
Your brother is a hero, despite what anyone else might say.

The depth you placed in this one,
was so overwhelming.
The flow was pretty good,
even if it wasn't a "normal" pattern.
This is going on my favorites.
& I hope you don't mind if I nominate this poem.
I think it is well deserved.
Good work, and keep writing. :]
Overall Rating: 5.5/5 [specialrating]

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BUT NEWAYz LYK I SAID I LOV3 TH3 P03M G00D J0B!!