WelL saiD.....prettY gooD expressionS anD mosT thrillinG tO reaD... 5/5

Well whats there to say but wow
i like it :D

5/5

Wow .... I'm speechless.
It's really good.
I like it ... I'm gonna vote on this.

I like the power in this one
well done
xx

Well done

Very nice poem, related well.
Kept me reading, but I had to read it twice.
I felt a little drifted from this one, but it was still very well made.
Keep it up <3
Again 5/5

- Nicole xx

Well the expression are really sad , i can see ,
but the structure is a bit off you need to decompose it into stanzas ,

and the rhyming was a bit off ,
but considering the strong emotions and expression of this poem and the sadness and the true pure feelings . this was discarded ...

great one !!!

I can feel the depression and the deep sadnes in your words ...

and i know that only the girl that lvoe that man a lot would jsut say these words to him ... it seem like blame and a jsut a very ahrd wish hiden to be the oposit of what he is now ...

this was a very short poem , but a very meanful one , ...

alothough i wouls prefer some rhyming adn more structure lie decomposing it into liek 2 stanzas , but i think the kidn of feleings you have been in wouls liek prevent some sort of organisation

great one and very good that you be able to get thsoe feeligns out
^_^