Beautiful... You wrote it greatly, I love your style of writing. Short but with wonderful and very powerful atmosphere. Very emotional piece, it deserves 5/5

Wow, just wow! Amazing poem, with so wonderfully created imagery. I like it from the beginning to the end, every line is just flawless.
Whole piece is very unique and creative.
5/5 from me

Marvellous!!! what a lovely penned, simply but beautiful write!

Bert.

The simple things in our lives are the ones that mean the most to our hearts.
Excellent job!
Take Care Cindy

Short, but I loved it :) thanks for taking time to read my poem

This poem from the first line,
seemed very.. gentle.
The emotion was displayed wonderfully.
Nice work, darling.
Overall Rating: 5.0/5

Great peom love it

I love your poem.
its great short and sweet!
5/5 great job!
check mine outt too :)

Idk, it just has the elegance about it that makes u luv it!
.:Katelyn:.

I really enjoyed reading this - thank you
K xx