A really good poem, life is unfair =)

"Have you ever had one of those days when life seems so unfair?
You give everything you have but receive nothing in return; no one seems to care?"

my fav lines :D

Great poem.. and yes i have had one of those days...seems like everyday.

but you did a great job... the only thing i would suggest is maybe seperating some of the lines... it would read better..but i still like this poem alot.5/5

Wow...and the answer to all those brilliant questions..yes yes yes...and so on..XOXO 5/5

Wow this was really good! i definetly rated 5/5. and i know exactly what you mean in the poem =/ but great job!

I love it!
i'm going to add it to my favorites actually.
it's obviously 5/5
keep up the outstanding work! : )

I adore this.
its completly amazing.
im adding it to my favorites.
its a deff. 5/5
your an amazing writer.
keep it up<3

This is a wonderful poem, I can relate so much to this. I've had those kind of days. I gave it 5/5 and added it to my favorites.

~Angel In Moonlight~