Comments : Have You Ever?

  • 13 years ago

    by brokenmirror

    A really good poem, life is unfair =)

    "Have you ever had one of those days when life seems so unfair?
    You give everything you have but receive nothing in return; no one seems to care?"

    my fav lines :D

  • 13 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Great poem.. and yes i have had one of those days...seems like everyday.

    but you did a great job... the only thing i would suggest is maybe seperating some of the lines... it would read better..but i still like this poem alot.5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by McKenna

    Wow...and the answer to all those brilliant questions..yes yes yes...and so on..XOXO 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Curry

    Wow this was really good! i definetly rated 5/5. and i know exactly what you mean in the poem =/ but great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by stacyneedsyou x3

    I love it!
    i'm going to add it to my favorites actually.
    it's obviously 5/5
    keep up the outstanding work! : )

  • 13 years ago

    by Taylor

    I adore this.
    its completly amazing.
    im adding it to my favorites.
    its a deff. 5/5
    your an amazing writer.
    keep it up<3

  • 13 years ago

    by Angel in moonlight

    This is a wonderful poem, I can relate so much to this. I've had those kind of days. I gave it 5/5 and added it to my favorites.

    ~Angel In Moonlight~