Deana,
How absolutely moving. This kind of love is immeasurable. True love definitely knows no boundaries. Great Job

Deana, this was beautiful expressed emotions penned... I agree with Rob "True love knows no end, not even death can stop it." writing from the heart, as well as talking can ease emotional pains.

Beautiful done, keep them coming dear friend, take care, Bert.

A very heartbreaking write...i love how you captured that not even death could seperate loved ones...very emotional poem and very well done, amazing work

andrew

I almost wonder if you have seen this "stranger" before. Is this something you imagine or some other real experience? It is the fact that this could be reality that enthralls me.

What a sweet poem!
Very touching.

" This love I have for you
Not even death can take away "

Those lines where just beautiful.

Great job
Take care

Great write! I do have a comment for this one...have you thought of dropping the "up there" in the third stanza? I don't think it would alter the feeling and it might add to an already awesome flow.
Are you really only 1???
I really enjoy reading your work after plowing through some of the High School work students ask me to read..they know not about rythm and rhyme is alien to most.

This poem really made me cry,
Thanks for letting me read it.

keep writing 5\5