Comments : You Won't Slip Away

  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Oh thats a sweet poem and situation 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    That adorable Kayla:D.

    You made me cry, it was so sweet and sad. A true heart racer.
    But My god girl! this was amazing. I loved it, the flow, the portrayal of true love.

    5/5 You deserve no less hun.

    -- Elaine.<3

  • 16 years ago

    by LuvstruckChild

    Beautiful, I went teary-eyed when I read it... Thinking about that kind of stuff makes me sad... Great job, though.
    ~Luvstruck~

  • 16 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    I LOVE THIS ONE... ITS SO SWEET! GREAT JOB! 5/5

    ::MELI::

  • 16 years ago

    by Chelsey

    It started out really sad, and then ended up really happy.
    While i was reading this I had so many emotions going through me.. Sadness (because you were sad that you guys weren't together) Pity (I felt bad for you, because you let him slip away and that you wanted him back so much) i even had feelings about whats gone on in my life in that poem.
    because I can relate to it so much.
    I also felt happy (beacuse you two had gotten back together and it had a happy ending, just like cinderella)
    =]
    good poem, really!
    xoxo
    --Chelsey