Woah dude deep.= )

When I saw that it was a dark poem I knew I would like it. This one doesn't seem to flow as well, though, especially in the second stanza.

A few spelling mistakes:
3rd stanza, 7th line need a comma after '...to lie'
5th stanza, should it be questions? instead of questioned.

I loved the comparison to cancer in the 5th stanza. Really well written.

<3<3 5/5

We are better then you say
And we stand here ready to scream
We fight againt the status quo
The green door barricade will be broken through

This is my personal favorite part of this poem/song. I like the metaphor of the green door. The rhymes that were used were different and offten time I found myself wondering why you put together some of the rhymes that you did.

This is a poem that I've been waiting for on this site. It has sparked something in the imagination of it's reader. For that I thank you.

Great poem and look foward to more