I loooooooooove it, its an amazing poem
keep it up 5/5

thanx 4 ur comment :)

Awww really cute poem : ) you can tell that this person meant alot to you 5/5 <33

Great descriptive word. you really painted the emotions for readers to feel!! loved it great job!!

This poem is beautifully written with tons of emotion and power. its sweet and tragic at the same time. i love it.
--aaprilsconspiracy