Psht, might as well be a poem, it's just that damn good! i love your poems, as you know, and i love how you just write, and even just your commonplace writing that isn't supposed to be a poem flows through your mind just like a poem, and a poem by goran always touches the heart. beautiful yet again, i love them always.

Hmmm
I think it was a poem, and a great one as well. as u know all ur poems are and that u don't need me to flatter u how great of a writer u are. but it just makes me terribly sad to see once again that sad tone in ur writting
hopefully things are going better than before
great job, keep the good work up
trust in ur self and ur love

Goran, This was amazing.
Are you sure it's just a journal entry?

All your poem's have such loyalty such faith and love laced beautifully through your peices.
All touch the heart... And all make you want too read more.

Another amazing peice.
5/5 Elaine.

Sometimes i set and wonder, how lucky she is that this great guy is finding these kind of words to tell us what she means to him.

I cried for this poem, honestly

Oh, a journal entry? It really doesn't seem like one. It is wonderfully written. I think it's great how you write like this in your journal. I loved the words you used and how you expressed your emotions.
"I am thirsty
For your look
Hungry for your smile.
Tell me"
^^ That was brilliant. :)

Keep it up && Take Care!

5/5 because your truly deserve it.

-Shannon <3

I liked it , It held such deep heartbreaking emotions. Its like you just hand a pen in your hand and it just went to work or something. It was really nice to read...

5/5 from me..

Why isn't this a poem?
Feelings were expressed,
depth was recognized..
flow was actually very good.
Huhm, could be a poem.
Anyway, this one was very well written.
The overall meaning was wonderful.
Good work with this one. :]

I lyke lol relz gud poem 5/5!!!! gud emotiun I lyke it lotz!

No really, good for you for sharing a page of your journal but it's better as just that. Formatted into a poem form is just not going to work.

As a journal good emotion
As a poem needs more imagery

I Love It!! Amazing!

5.5**
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AWW :'( this is sad but i dont know why at the same time it makes me smile. Well its was nice one. Dast Xosh.