I really like it!!

It was good...A little creepy, but if you read it a few times you get the message..that you were trying to send...good job...

5/5

I could sense a hidden meaning behind this poem; maybe I am wrong. There was a few grammar errors, but nothing real serious. It was okay.
4.5
Ciao~

I felt like the rymthes where forced, which made the flow choppy. I think if you, revise it, and try too make it flow a little more smoothly.. then it could be a more natural poem.
I really liked the concept, and as Niclean said above, it would make a very interesting poem, and add more emotion, and possibly help the flow if you described the monster as a parent or something.
Still A good Job,
Keep it up,
Elaine.

This is a great peom i totally injoyed reading it and i agree with it there is a monster in my home to