Samantha, this is truly superb poem so intense and so heartfelt, each line is panited with true emotions.Loved it, its simply amazing.

Take care
chavii.

Sam
What an awesome piece you have penned. This is really beautiful yet so sad.

Still your ghost haunts my dreams,
Enters my soul, takes life from me,
And each time you ride away,
I know I'm no longer free.

Love you ending. Worth waiting for :)
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Wowowowow..this was so deep and painfully written.. i cn feel it.. the energy flowing from this..WOW..and yes,Very relatable.
amazingly penned.

"..Seeing you walk across the sea,
Further from my arms,
I cry sometimes without you here,
As does the ocean with all its charms.."

=']

~Wake~

Amazing.

Filled with so much heartache.... the choice of words were beautiful and made for a wonderful read, rhyme and flow was perfect... a beautifully sad write!