Very nice. Poems that don't rhyme are always the hardest to create because they're judged on a higher standard then rhyming poems but I think you did very well 4/5

Wow, that was really nice. Theres anger in this and the flow was good. And in life, the tables can turn faster than you really think, what can ya say? A lot of things can happen in very little time. Well done on this. Keep it up.