Wow! This is so good. :].
5/5.

xxo

You have a talent bro...keep it up...i want you topics and idea how to write...great...5/5 ^_^ pinoy rocks

Are we all not story tellers of some type. I like the topic that you have chosen to write about. It is indeed very interesting and provides much truth in a sense.

Another wonderful write...

--Sher

This was great, i loved every word of it, the way you expressed it was perfect.

Ahhhhh... You are sooo good. WOW!!!
I love it.. YOu have such a way of expressing yourself. You are so talented. I am excited to read some more of your poetry...

-- by the way thanks for your comment