I really like this

Superbly written, it has great atmosphere and topic is also good. Fourth and fifth stanzas are perfect. I am impressed this piece absolutely deserves 5/5

This is absolutely amacing!
The mood you created is incredible, and your chose of words, is just wow.

This poem was filled with imagination and that's what made it so great! You really expressed yourself very well. The poem flowed really nicely, too. Keep writing! 5/5

~Kristina

I would so love to put music to your words cause its awesome where do you pull this from