Comments : The Music

  • 16 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow dear, this was another great one...
    specially i love the rhyme, you have done a great job..
    keep up the great work like always.
    congrates on completing 100 poems, i have six to achive that.lol.

  • 16 years ago

    by SomeRomanticGuy

    Awesome babe.

  • 16 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    I love this piece! The flow was flawless,
    and your word choice was right on point.
    A true pleasure to read.

    Write On!
    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    Wow.
    I really liked it. I think it ended too soon, maybe another stanza or two?
    But, you did a wonderful job hun.
    It's flawless, excluding the abrupt ending.

    5.5