Comments : A virgins secret...

  • 16 years ago

    by babblingxbrooke

    Wow...I really like this one!..it flowed nicely and kept you guessing until the end

    Brooke<3

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    Omg! The imagry in this was amazing. I loved it. Your flow was perfect and I love the end of it. Great job. I still can not get over the image you put into my mind you really had my attention! Once again, great job!
    5/5

    Amber...